Chinese Zodiac sign
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강사 첨삭
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My chinese Zodiac sign ( rabbit ).
>> My chinese Zodiac sign is rabbit.
I'm going to talk about my chinese zodiac sign.
>> Correct
Rabbit : they have great artistic skills, kind and get lots of respect from others.
>> Rabbits have great artistic skills, kind and get lots of respect from others.
However, they are too sensitive so they can be a cold person.
>> Correct
Also, rabbits are smart.
>> Also, people who were born in the year of the rabbit are smart.
But some say that rabbit kids are not good.
>> Though, some people say that kids born in the year of the rabbit are not good.
I don't know why.
>> Correct.
Still, I like my zodiac sign because it's in the 4th place.
>> Correct
This year is for rabbits.
>> Correct
I hope it brings me lots of luck.
>> Correct
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