chitchat

2010-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I rattled on for hours about my troubles. I tried to keep it on my mind, but couldn't stand it. even though it dosen't solve anything, but chitchat is one way of salving my mind burden. I like to make a plan and challenge to something. but i couldn't get well with it, sometimes it bothered me. someone told me that i need to recognize my limit and make a choice what i really want to do. and concentrate in it. I know well about it. but my problem is i couldn't make a decision well.

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I rattled on for hours about my troubles.>>correct I tried to keep it on my mind, but couldn't stand it.>>correcteven though it dosen’t solve anything, but chitchat is one way of salving my mind burden. >>even though it doesn’t solve anything, but having a chitchat about it is one way of venting out my problemI like to make a plan and challenge to something. >>I like to make a plan and challenge myself to do somethingbut i couldn't get well with it, sometimes it bothered me. >> but i couldn't get well with it, sometimes it bothers me.someone told me that i need to recognize my limit and make a choice what i really want to do. >>correct and concentrate in it. >>and concentrate with it I know well about it. >>correct but my problem is i couldn't make a decision well. >>correct >>But my problem is that I couldn’t make a good decision

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