Chocolate

Lots of kid likes sweets and chocolate. Here's a poem that I wrote about chocolate: 'Chocolate chocolate chocolate sweet, Cakes and doughnuts can't be beat. Ice cream is my favourite treat With lots and lots of pies to eat!' Chocolate is very sweet and yummy. However chocolate and sweets and ice creams are bad for the teeth. When you eat chocolate you want to eat more even my mom can't help it. There's a book about chocolate and sweet that Roald Dahl wrote it's called 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory'.I have lots of books that Roald Dalh wrote. Oh,and I've saw the movie 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory'. Sadly,I haven't read the 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory'book but when I saw the movie it was so fun and interesting. ~~Emma~~

Hi there EMMA!:) Happy Friday!   I did not do any corrections for the poem that you composed. Why? Because poems use figurative speech, rhymes, connotative meanings, and symbolisms so I wanted to keep your literature work raw. It\'s a good poem. You were able to express your thoughts very well. Why not make a copy and put it on a frame of photobook for keeping? You are quite good in writing so I suggest that you sharpen or enhance this skill.^__^   ~T. Mayleen~   Lots of kid likes sweets and chocolate. >> A lot of kids like sweets and chocolates.Here\'s a poem that I wrote about chocolate: >> CORRECT OR: Here\'s a poem I wrote about chocolate:\'Chocolate chocolate chocolate sweet,Cakes and doughnuts can\'t be beat.Ice cream is my favourite treatWith lots and lots of pies to eat!\'Chocolate is very sweet and yummy.However chocolate and sweets and ice creams are bad for the teeth.When you eat chocolate you want to eat more even my mom can\'t help it.There\'s a book about chocolate and sweet that Roald Dahl wrote it\'s called\'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory\'.I have lots of books that Roald Dalh wrote. Oh,and I\'ve saw the movie \'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory\'. >> Oh! I have seen the movie Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.Sadly,I haven\'t read the \'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory\'book but when I saw the movie it was so fun and interesting. >> Sadly, I haven\'t read the book Charlie and the Chocolate Factory but the movie was so fun and interesting.~~Emma~~