Chocolate for Sadness and Emptiness
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Here are my corrections for you:
When I feel sad, I usually find myself having chocolate.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> When I feel sad, I usually find myself eating chocolate.
Most chocolate-flavored snacks are sweet and crunchy, so It works as a conversation with friend or family.
>> Most chocolate-flavored snacks are sweet and crunchy, so it works as an accompaniment to conversation with a friend or family.
However, I don\'t think this is ideal solution for sadness.
>> However, I don\'t think this is an ideal solution for sadness.
I know stress eating is one of the way to survive in chaos of emotions, but there must be better way.
>> I know stress eating is one of the ways to survive in the chaos of emotions, but there must be better way.
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