Chocolate that attracts people
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I think chocolate has a sweet taste that attracts people.
People seem to be addicted to that strong sweetness.
I also like chocolate and often eat when I feel tired.
When I\'m tired, I sometimes think of chocolate and so I eat it.
I like to eat \"free time\" chocolate.
“Free Time” is one of the chocolate brand names.
However, I enjoy the kind of dark chocolate in order to my health.
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I think chocolate has a sweet taste that attracts people.
>> Correct
People seem to be addicted to that strong sweetness.
People seem to be addicted to that strong sweetness.
>> Correct
I also like chocolate and often eat when I feel tired.
I also like chocolate and often eat when I feel tired.
>> I also like chocolate and often eat it when I feel tired.
When I\'m tired, I sometimes think of chocolate and so I eat it.
When I\'m tired, I sometimes think of chocolate and so I eat it.
>> Correct
I like to eat \"free time\" chocolate.
I like to eat \"free time\" chocolate.
>> Correct
“Free Time” is one of the chocolate brand names.
“Free Time” is one of the chocolate brand names.
>> Correct
However, I enjoy the kind of dark chocolate in order to my health.
However, I enjoy the kind of dark chocolate in order to my health.
>> However, I enjoy dark chocolate in order to maintain good health.
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