Chocolates

This is nostalgic, [이름]!

Childhood days are awesome. If we could just turn back the time. ha! ha! ha! You supplied a good composition. Keep them coming. Hats off to you!

~Teacher Eunice

There are various types of sweets and snacks in the world, however, I haven\'t had a lot of them even in my childhood and now.
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It\'s because my mom hasn\'t been a big fan or even favor of sweets and me and my brother haven\'t had chances to get sweets that most of kids at our age carry with all day.

>>> It\'s because my mom hasn\'t been a big fan or even in favor of sweets, so my brother and I haven\'t had chances to get sweets that most of kids at our age carry with all day. 
As a result, I haven\'t naturally been close with sweets in my life. 

>>> As a result, I haven\'t been eating sweets in my life.  

I became a type of person like, if I have money, I would buy things not sweets and I did even back in the days.
>>> I became a type of person like, if I have money, I would buy things not sweets, and I did that even back in the days. 

Despite of the sweet-less childhood forced by my mom\'s taste, chocolates are my sore favorite.
>>> Despite of the sweetless childhood forced by my mom\'s taste, chocolates are still my favorite.

My favorite anniversary has been Valentines day, and I ran to the stores and every kind of chocolates they had and shared them with my friends.
>>> My favorite holiday has been Valentine\'s day, so I ran to the stores to buy every kind of chocolate they had and shared them with my friends.  

I could still feel how happy I was looking at the chocolates with pretty boxes, or in funny shapes that I got from my friends and myself stocked in a corner of my rooms.
>>> I could still feel how happy I was looking at the chocolates with pretty boxes, or in funny shapes that I got from my friends and stocked it in the corner of my room.  

I am happy that this writing reminded me of my old days and innocent happiness as a child.

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