Choice

Absolute right given to man is a right of choice. A new born baby also has a right of choice whether stop or continue crying. Like this way, baby have the right of choice to train their parents. The parents can choose their feelings whether express coldness or love to their baby. Choice of baby and parent makes the first relationships between humans. Small choices beginning from the early childhood make their life. Education is also pratice to learn a correct choice, that is, teach how to get discrimination to choose corectly and responsibility for choice. What I am like now and my present position are results of numerous selection from the past, and what I will be like in the future will be decided by which actions I choose now.

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! ^.^ Happy Monday! ^^   A pleasurable day to you! ^^,   First of all, I would like to say thank you for your composition. I really like it, especially the last sentence. It\'s a pleasure to read it again and again. ^^.   Anyway, I noticed that you are still confused on how to use articles and prepositions. Therefore, I am encouraging you to read some information about those parts of grammar.   Anyhow, please see the corrections and suggestions below.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you later! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Absolute right given to man is a right of choice. >> An absolute right given to a man is a right of choice. >> OR: An absolute right given to a man is freedom of choice. 1. There should be AN and A before ABSOLUTE RIGHT and MAN. A new born baby also has a right of choice whether stop or continue crying. >> A new born baby also has a right of choice whether to stop or continue crying. 2. There should be TO before STOP. Like this way, baby have the right of choice to train their parents. >> Like this way, babies have the right of choice to be trained by their parents. 3. Since you used HAVE and THEIR PARENTS, BABY should be BABIES. The parents can choose their feelings whether express coldness or love to their baby. >> The parents can choose their feelings whether to express coldness or love to their babies. 4. PATTERN: whether to + base-verb ... whether + noun Choice of baby and parent makes the first relationships between humans. >> Choice of a baby and his or her parents make the first relationship between humans. 5. I think it is better to add A before BABY and HIS OR HER before PARENTS. 6. RELATIONSHIPS should be RELATIONSHIP. Small choices beginning from the early childhood make their life. >> Small choices beginning from the early childhood make their lives. 7. LIFE should be LIVES because of THEIR. Education is also pratice to learn a correct choice, that is, teach how to get discrimination to choose corectly and responsibility for choice. >> I THINK IT IS BETTER TO DAY: Education is also a way to learn how to have correct choices, that ism teach how to get discrimination to choose choices correctly and responsibly. What I am like now and my present position are results of numerous selection from the past, and what I will be like in the future will be decided by which actions I choose now. >> CORRECT!