choices
학생이 쓴 원문
Choosing for others is not easy.
We have to choose carefully with a lot of time.
I can be responsible for my own choice and the damage from it.
It`s so terrible when the choice for others ii wrong.
So I try not to make a choice for others as much as I can.
I could give them some advice, I`ll not make the last choice.
Just I can not live another person`s life,
The choice is the same.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]~ Thank you for doing your homework. As always, you did a great job. Keep it up! See you in class.
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
We have to choose carefully with a lot of time.
>> CORRECT
>> I will be responsible for my own choices and the damage from it.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> I could give them pieces of advice, I won\'t make the last choice.
>> I cannot live for another person\'s life.
>> CORRECT
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