Choose a festival from another country? What do people do during that festival?
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U.S.A is have holiday Halloween they are holding pumpkin bucket and they are collecting candy.
So U.S.A is very fun have Halloween.
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Choose a festival from another country? What do people do during that festival?
U.S.A is have holiday Halloween they are holding pumpkin bucket and they are collecting candy.
>>> The U.S.A. has a holiday called Halloween. People carry pumpkin buckets and collect candy.
>>> OR: In the United States, Halloween includes traditions like trick-or-treating with pumpkin-shaped containers.
So U.S.A is very fun have Halloween.
>>> Halloween in the U.S.A. is a very fun celebration!
>>> OR: It’s one of the most popular and exciting holidays celebrated there.
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