Choose a person or persons you admire and explain why.

2017-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

The person I respect most is King Se-Jong.(Se-Jong Great.) He created the Korean alphabet,Hanguel. Because of this feat, all people respect him. I also think that Hanguel creation is most feat of him. However there is another reason why I respect him. He is very wise man who always think about people's safety. He invented the agricultural tools such as 'Raingauge', 'Sundial' and wrote the books about farming for people. He always tried to cut the mustard as people expected. So I think that he is the most respectable king of Korea until now.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] :)

Good afternoon :)

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the question. :)

King Se-Jong really is a great King basing from all of his great achievements. :)

By the way, please check the following corrections.

See you in our class. :)

Take care :)


~~ Teacher Kris


The person I respect most is King Se-Jong.(Se-Jong Great.)

>> The person that I respect the most is King Se-Jong- also called as Se-Jong the Great.
He created the  Korean alphabet, Hanguel.

>> Correct

Because of this feat, all people respect him. I also think that Hanguel creation is most feat of him.

>> Because of this feat, all Koreans has been respecting him. I also think that creation of Hangeul is the most feat for him.
 However there is another reason why I respect him.

>> However, there is another reason why I respected him.
 He is very wise man who always think about people\'s safety.

>> He is a very wise man who always thought about the safety of his people.
 He invented the agricultural tools such as \'Raingauge\', \'Sundial\' and wrote the books about farming for people. He always tried to cut the mustard as people expected.

>> He invented the agricultural tools such as \"Raingauge\", \"Sundial\", and wrote books about farming. He always tried to cut the mustard as people expected.
 So I think that he is the most respectable king of Korea until now.

>> Correct

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