Choose holidays
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I choose \'A relaxing stay at a beach resort\'.
Because, touring an ancient civilization is not a rest.
And shopping in a busy city will be tired, because it will be many people in there.
So, beach resort is a good place to rest.
I need to be quiet and it should really able to rest on holidays.
I can see a lot of marine animals and relax while looking at the beach.
The slow wave and warm weather will be nice.
These are the reasons why I choose \'A relaxing stay at a beach resort\'.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! You\'re doing great with your homework submissions.
Here are a few corrections to improve clarity and grammar:
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
I choose \'A relaxing stay at a beach resort\'.
>>> CORRECT!!
Because, touring an ancient civilization is not a rest.>>> Because touring an ancient civilization is not a rest.
And shopping in a busy city will be tired, because it will be many people in there.
And shopping in a busy city will be tired, because it will be many people in there.
>>> And shopping in a busy city will be tiring, because there will be many people there.
So, beach resort is a good place to rest.
So, beach resort is a good place to rest.
>>> So, a beach resort is a good place to rest.
I need to be quiet and it should really able to rest on holidays.
I need to be quiet and it should really able to rest on holidays.
>>> I need it to be quiet and I should really be able to rest on holidays.
I can see a lot of marine animals and relax while looking at the beach.
I can see a lot of marine animals and relax while looking at the beach.
>>> CORRECT!!
The slow wave and warm weather will be nice.
The slow wave and warm weather will be nice.
>>> The slow waves and warm weather will be nice.
These are the reasons why I choose \'A relaxing stay at a beach resort\'.
These are the reasons why I choose \'A relaxing stay at a beach resort\'.
>>> CORRECT!!
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