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2022-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think Christmas do not have to be a important holiday, because it was not first started in Korea. Also, there are more important holidays than Christamas is Korea.

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I think Christmas do not have to be a important holiday, because it was not first started in Korea. Also, there are more important holidays than Christamas is Korea.

>> I think Christmas is not an important holiday because it didn\'t started in South Korea. Also, there are more important holidays than Christmas here in South Korea.

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