Christmas

2021-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The most gratefulthing ion this christmas is that i could watch Spiderman No Way Home on Christmas. I really want to watxh it but I didn’t have time to watch,but christmas gave me time for watch it,

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Hi [이름]:)

I am also looking forward to watch that!

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The most gratefulthing ion this christmas is that i could watch Spiderman No Way Home on Christmas.

>> This Christmas, I am most grateful for watching \"Spiderman: No Way Home\".

I really want to watxh it but I didn’t have time to watch,but christmas gave me time for watch it,

>> I really want to watch it because I didn\'t have that much time to watch. Fortunately, I had some time on Christmas.

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