Christmas

2015-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I am really looking forward to Christmas bcause I can get present from Santa and have fun. Some of my friends say that there isn't a Santa in the world but I belive there is a Santa. I have to be good to get present from Santa. I make Christmas card and they are really fun. I send it to my friends at England and I hope that they are fine and healthy. The date of the Christmas is 12.25.

강사 첨삭

Hello Emma! It\'s a terrific Thursday!^^   I can say that you\'re really excited for Christmas though it\'s not that celebrated in Korea--I think.^^ When I was a child, I also believed in Santa Claus. I liked watching animated shows sor cartoons about Santa, Rudolph, and anything related to Christmas. I was always excited for school Christmas parties.^_^   Thank you so much for this composition, Emma. I have read it well.   ~T. Mayleen~     I am really looking forward to Christmas bcause I can get present from Santa and have fun. >> I\'m really looking forward to Christmas because it\'s fun and I can get a present from Santa.   Some of my friends say that there isn\'t a Santa in the world but I belive there is a Santa. >> Some of my friends said Santa isn\'t real but I still believe he exist.   I have to be good to get present from Santa. >> I have to be a good girl to get a present from him.   I make Christmas card and they are really fun. >> I engkoyed making Christmas cards.   I send it to my friends at England and I hope that they are fine and healthy. >> I sent them to my friends in England; I hope they\'re all fine. The date of the Christmas is 12.25. >> Christmas day is on December 25.  

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