Christmas
학생이 쓴 원문
I am really looking forward to Christmas bcause I can get present from Santa and have fun. Some of my friends say that there isn't a Santa in the world but I belive there is a Santa. I have to be good to get present from Santa. I make Christmas card and they are really fun. I send it to my friends at England and I hope that they are fine and healthy.
The date of the Christmas is 12.25.
강사 첨삭
Hello Emma!
It\'s a terrific Thursday!^^
I can say that you\'re really excited for Christmas though it\'s not that celebrated in Korea--I think.^^
When I was a child, I also believed in Santa Claus. I liked watching animated shows sor cartoons about Santa, Rudolph, and anything related to Christmas. I was always excited for school Christmas parties.^_^
Thank you so much for this composition, Emma. I have read it well.
~T. Mayleen~
I am really looking forward to Christmas bcause I can get present from Santa and have fun.
>> I\'m really looking forward to Christmas because it\'s fun and I can get a present from Santa.
Some of my friends say that there isn\'t a Santa in the world but I belive there is a Santa.
>> Some of my friends said Santa isn\'t real but I still believe he exist.
I have to be good to get present from Santa.
>> I have to be a good girl to get a present from him.
I make Christmas card and they are really fun.
>> I engkoyed making Christmas cards.
I send it to my friends at England and I hope that they are fine and healthy.
>> I sent them to my friends in England; I hope they\'re all fine.
The date of the Christmas is 12.25.
>> Christmas day is on December 25.
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