Christmas coming
학생이 쓴 원문
Christmas is around the corner.Today,in baseball there was a big news.Kim Hyen Soo went to LG Twins for really much money.My friends told to me.In Christmas eve I will go church.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think you feel sad about that news.
Isn\'t it?
Some players do that because they want to earn much money.
Oh, it will be fun I guess to go to church. ^^
Cheer up! See you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Christmas is around the corner.
>> correct
Today,in baseball there was a big news.
>> Today, there\'s a big news about baseball.
Kim Hyen Soo went to LG Twins for really much money.
>> correct
My friends told to me.
>> correct
In Christmas eve I will go church.
>> I will go to church on Christmas eve.
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