Christmas coming

2017-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Christmas is around the corner.Today,in baseball there was a big news.Kim Hyen Soo went to LG Twins for really much money.My friends told to me.In Christmas eve I will go church.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I think you feel sad about that news.

Isn\'t it?

Some players do that because they want to earn much money.

Oh, it will be fun I guess to go to church. ^^

Cheer up! See you on Thursday!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Christmas is around the corner.

>> correct

Today,in baseball there was a big news.

>> Today, there\'s a big news about baseball.

Kim Hyen Soo went to LG Twins for really much money.

>> correct

My friends told to me.

>> correct

In Christmas eve I will go church.

>> I will go to church on Christmas eve.

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