Christmas Eve

Dear [이름]!!

Spending Christmas watching a great musical is awesome!! I hope that you had a great time with your wife! (^_^)

~Teacher Megan~

When Christmas eve, fortunately, we got a couple of musical tickets called \"Aida\". 

>> On Christmas eve, fortunately, we got a couple of musical tickets entitled \"Aida\".

It is famous for a very sad story about a Nubian princess who is enslaved by Egypt army and fall in love with Egyptian general all around the world. 

>> It is famous sad story about a Nubian princess who is enslaved by an Egyptian army and fall in love with an Egyptian general.

my wife is half-day off, we got together at cafe nearby my workplace afternoon as we expect that would be a traffic jam by car. 

>> My wife is in a half-day off, we met each other at a cafe nearby my workplace in the afternoon, since we expect that their would be a heavy traffic jam.

as we expected, that was really rush-hour after work at Christmas eve. we took 1 and half hour to get the musical theater. 

>> As we expected, it was really a rush-hour after work on the Christmas eve. It took us 1 and half hour to reach the musical theater.

we didn\'t have enough time to eat dinner, we just ate simple snack. 

>> OR: Since we didn\'t have enough time to eat dinner, we settled with a simple snack.

Finally show came up, but seats are very uncomfortable and narrow to sit. and the show time is 2 hour 45 minutes! such a long length. 

>> Finally, the show started, but the seats are very uncomfortable and narrow to sit in. And the show time is for 2 hour 45 minutes! such a long length. 

and the situation got worse and worse, the musical is too loose that can\'t avoid s[이름]piness. 

>> and the situation got worst, the musical is too loose that we can\'t avoid to be s[이름]py. 

The time reachs at 11:30 pm, the show lastly ended. It\'s been quite a tough day, but also a memorable day.

>> As the time reaches 11:30 pm, the show finally ended. It\'s been  a tough day, but also a memorable one.