Christmas Film
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Are any particular films shown during the Christmas period in your country? Write about one movie/film.
Do you know the movie ?
In Korea, people like that movie and watch that movie.
It is about a boy named Kevin left alone in his house.
-Kevin left alone in his house for excident. But one day, He learned that 2 burglars are peeking to his house. What can he do?-
This is very fun and also comedy movie!
I like this movie!
P.S. Merry Christmas!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Clair!
Here\'s your corrected homework.
On a different note, this holiday season, let’s make it a point to cherish what’s truly important in our lives. Let\'s have a safe, healthy, and Merry Christmas!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Are any particular films shown during the Christmas period in your country? Write about one movie/film.
Do you know the movie ?
>> Do you know the movie Home Alone?
>> or: Have you seen the movie Home Alone?
In Korea, people like that movie and watch that movie.
>> In Korea, people like that movie, and many of us have watched it.
It is about a boy named Kevin left alone in his house.
>> correct
-Kevin left alone in his house for excident. But one day, He learned that 2 burglars are peeking to his house. What can he do?-
>> Kevin was left alone at home by accident. But one day, he learned that two burglars were spying on his house. He was just a kid who was home alone, so what could he do?
This is very fun and also comedy movie!
>> This is a fun and hilarious film!
I like this movie!
>> or: I love this movie!
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