Christmas in the past and Christmas in the present
학생이 쓴 원문
Christmas is a holiday that celebrates the birth of Jesus. In the past, it used to be for religious reasons, but today it is also a day to spend time with family and friends. I think Christmas is more meaningful today than in the past. It is not only for religious reasons, but also for spending quality time with family and friends and getting closer.
강사 첨삭
Christmas is a holiday that celebrates the birth of Jesus.
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OR >> Christmas is a holiday to celebrate Jesus’ birth.
In the past, it used to be for religious reasons, but today it is also a day to spend time with family and friends.
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OR >> In the past, it was mainly for religious reasons, but today it is also a time to spend with family and friends.
I think Christmas is more meaningful today than in the past. It is not only for religious reasons, but also for spending quality time with family and friends and getting closer.
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OR >> I think Christmas is more meaningful today than in the past. It is not only about religion, but also about spending quality time with family and friends and growing closer to them.
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