Christmas on 2017
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
You think more mature nowadays.
Maybe you had a different point of view about life.
Is it the reason why you became silent as well?
I hope not. It\'s better for you to be expressive.
But I\'m happy with the change.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
This Christmas was pretty glommmy.
>> This Christmas was pretty gloomy.
I played a lot, but it was not fun.
>> correct
I went to chruh and had acting and watch performance.
>> I went to the church and had acting. I also watched a performance.
I practiced a lot for play.And it was wonderful.
>> I practiced a lot for the play and the outcome was wonderful.
After going church and I watched movie.It was with God.
>> After going to the church, I watched a movie about God.
It was not very fantastic.But the content of with God is special.
>> It was not very fantastic, but the content about God is special.
But I don\'t believe revive at the movie.
>> But I don\'t believe in reviving someone in the movie.
And I had a nice dinner with my aunt,too.
>> I also had a nice dinner with my aunt.
It was good Christmas but it was gloomy Christmas.
>> It was a good Christmas, but it was also a gloomy Christmas.
I know why this Christmas was gloomy.
>> correct
My thought became grown up than before.
>> I think I became more mature now than before.
And I know what I\'m looking forward to ____ ___ _____..............
>> And I know what I\'m looking forward to is to be a grown up man.
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