Christmas to me is not a religious day.
학생이 쓴 원문
Christmas to me is not a religious day. I have no religion. Christmas is an exciting day for me. Even without gifts from Santa Claus, Christmas is always a day to look forward to. I love the Christmas and winter atmosphere. It is a day to spend time with friends and family.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Christmas to me is not a religious day.
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I have no religion. Christmas is an exciting day for me.
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Even without gifts from Santa Claus, Christmas is always a day to look forward to.
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I love the Christmas and winter atmosphere.
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It is a day to spend time with friends and family.
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