Chu seok!
학생이 쓴 원문
Chu seok is like the Thanksgiving day in the US.
We have a memorial service for our ancestors.
We eat Song pyun! It's delicious!
And then we wish for our dreams to come true!
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear! =) It\'s great to finally hear from you again. Here are some corrections I made to improve your sentences further. Take care and see you soon in class! I really appreciate your smartness and attentiveness in class.. kkkk.. Have a nice day my dear!
~Teacher Meg
Chu seok is like the Thanksgiving day in the US.
>>CORRECT! =) OR
>>Chusoek is similar to the Thanksgiving Day which is celebrated in the US.We have a memorial service for our ancestors.
>>CORRECT! OR
>>On that day, a memorial service is done for our ancestors.We eat Song pyun!
>>CORRECT!
It\'s delicious!
>>CORRECT!And then we wish for our dreams to come true!
>>CORRECT! OR
>>Then, we wish for our dreams to come true!
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