Chu seok!

2012-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Meg

학생이 쓴 원문

Chu seok is like the Thanksgiving day in the US. We have a memorial service for our ancestors. We eat Song pyun! It's delicious! And then we wish for our dreams to come true!

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear! =) It\'s great to finally hear from you again. Here are some corrections I made to improve your sentences further. Take care and see you soon in class! I really appreciate your smartness and attentiveness in class.. kkkk.. Have a nice day my dear! ~Teacher Meg Chu seok is like the Thanksgiving day in the US. >>CORRECT! =) OR >>Chusoek is similar to the Thanksgiving Day which is celebrated in the US.We have a memorial service for our ancestors. >>CORRECT! OR >>On that day, a memorial service is done for our ancestors.We eat Song pyun! >>CORRECT! It\'s delicious! >>CORRECT!And then we wish for our dreams to come true! >>CORRECT! OR >>Then, we wish for our dreams to come true!

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