Church camping
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I went to church camping from Monday to Wedensday.It was not bad.
>> I went to a church camping from Monday to Wednesday and it wasn\'t that bad.
I usually pray to god and get a lesson from missonary or priest.
>> I usually pray to God and get lessons from missionaries and priests.
I sang a song about god.
>> I sang songs about God.
The food was great.And the program was good to.
>> The food was good and the program was good too.
There were 700people in church camping.I enjoy the program.
>> There were 700 people in the church camping and I enjoyed the program.
Next week it is my english teacher break.But there will be a lot of homework.
>> Next week, it is my English teacher\'s break.
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