Church's Camp
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hi, [이름]!
I was asking you about your last week awhile ago.
So this is it. I got the answer. kkk
Anyway, good luck to you!
I know that you will achieve your goals in life because you are a determined student.
Congratulations [이름]! ^_^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I went to church on Thursday to Saturday last week.
>> Correct
I didn\'t have this class because I want to go to church.
>> Correct
On Thrusday I ate Samgumpsal.And on Friday,I went to school.
>> On Thursday I ate samgyeupsal and on Friday, I went to school.
It is my Graduation day.I went to church after that ceremony.
>> It\'s my graduation day and I went to the church after the ceremony.
I participated acting.And at night I praised saying \"Jesus please met me.
>> I participated in acting and at night I praised by saying \"Jesus please help or bless me\".
\"Maybe I shouted it for 300times.
>> Maybe I shouted it for 300 times.
That time I had a cold but On Saturday I didn\'t have a cold.After prasing a lot I ate a chicken and played game.On Saturday I went to toekboki restaurant.
>> That time I had a cold ,but I recovered from it on Saturday. After prasing a lot I ate a chicken and played a game. Then on Saturday, I went to a ttoekbokki restaurant.
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