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2017-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

I went to church on Thursday to Saturday last week.I didn't have this class because I want to go to church.On Thrusday I ate Samgumpsal.And on Friday,I went to school.It is my Graduation day.I went to church after that ceremony.I participated acting.And at night I praised saying "Jesus please met me."Maybe I shouted it for 300times.That time I had a cold but On Saturday I didn't have a cold.After prasing a lot I ate a chicken and played game.On Saturday I went to toekboki restaurant.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I was asking you about your last week awhile ago.

So this is it. I got the answer. kkk

Anyway, good luck to you!

I know that you will achieve your goals in life because you are a determined student.

Congratulations [이름]! ^_^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


I went to church on Thursday to Saturday last week.

>> Correct

I didn\'t have this class because I want to go to church.

>> Correct

On Thrusday I ate Samgumpsal.And on Friday,I went to school.

>> On Thursday I ate samgyeupsal and on Friday, I went to school.

It is my Graduation day.I went to church after that ceremony.

>> It\'s my graduation day and I went to the church after the ceremony.

I participated acting.And at night I praised saying \"Jesus please met me.

>> I participated in acting and at night I praised by saying \"Jesus please help or bless me\".

\"Maybe I shouted it for 300times.

>> Maybe I shouted it for 300 times.

That time I had a cold but On Saturday I didn\'t have a cold.After prasing a lot I ate a chicken and played game.On Saturday I went to toekboki restaurant.

>> That time I had a cold ,but I recovered from it on Saturday. After prasing a lot I ate a chicken and played a game. Then on Saturday, I went to a ttoekbokki restaurant.

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