Chuseok
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How early do you prepare for Chuseok?
My mother will prepare for a week before Chuseok. I only cook Jeons with prepared ingredients on the day of Chuseok.
What foods are associated with Chuseok? And what is your favorite Chuseok food?
There are many foods of Chuseok like Galbijjim, Jeon and Songpyon.
Jeon is my favorite Chuseok food. Follows below is the mathod that we make Jeon.
After coating various ingredients with flour, soak the eggs and fry them in oil. However, Jeon is slightly different from the fried one. Jeon feels like it\'s being baked with a little oil.
Because I eat a lot of them, I will be more fatty after Chuseok.
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Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
My mother will prepare for a week before Chuseok.
>>CORRECT!
I only cook Jeons with prepared ingredients on the day of Chuseok.
I only cook Jeons with prepared ingredients on the day of Chuseok.
>>CORRECT!
There are many foods of Chuseok like Galbijjim, Jeon and Songpyon.
>>CORRECT!
Jeon is my favorite Chuseok food.
>>CORRECT!Jeon is my favorite Chuseok food.
Follows below is the mathod that we make Jeon.
>> Follows below is the method on how we make Jeon.
After coating various ingredients with flour, soak the eggs and fry them in oil.
>>CORRECT!
However, Jeon is slightly different from the fried one.
>>CORRECT!Jeon feels like it\'s being baked with a little oil.
>>CORRECT!
Because I eat a lot of them, I will be more fatty after Chuseok.
Because I eat a lot of them, I will be more fatty after Chuseok.
>>Because I eat a lot of them, I will fattier after Chuseok.
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