Chuseok

2010-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Dona

학생이 쓴 원문

Chuseok is coming to Korean. Chuseok is one of the biggest holiday in Korea. I will go to the headquater of mind meditation academy to train my mind for a week. Because I can use 1 week holiday including Chuseok vacations. I can't use 1 week holidays at ordinary days. That's why I will go there using the holidays to train my mind. After I have trained my mind meditation, I really feel better and easy than the past even though I just belongs to 3 levels of 8. Before I go to there at Chuseok holidays, I have to ask to be excused my uncle,aunts,cousins. I think it's more important than enjoying Chuseok with my family,cousins. Mind meditation is to fight true I to false I

강사 첨삭

Hello there! How are you doing? I hope everything's fine. Here are the corrections I made so study them and practice again. Enjoy studying. ^^ >>Dona<<   Chuseok is coming to Korean. >>Chuseok is coming to Korea. Chuseok is one of the biggest holiday in Korea. >> Chuseok is one of the biggest holidays in Korea.  I will go to the headquater of mind meditation academy to train my mind for a week. >>I will go to the head quarters for meditation to train my mind for a week. Because I can use 1 week holiday including Chuseok vacations. >>CORRECT. I can't use 1 week holidays at ordinary days. >>I can't use a week holiday on ordinary days. That's why I will go there using the holidays to train my mind. >>CORRECT.  After I have trained my mind meditation, I really feel better and easy than the past even though I just belongs to 3 levels of 8. >>After training my mind for meditating, I would feel better and comfortable than the past even though I only belong to the 3rd of 8 levels. Before I go to there at Chuseok holidays, I have to ask to be excused my uncle,aunts,cousins. >>Before going there on Chuseok holiday, I'll have to ask permission from my uncles, aunts and cousins. I think it's more important than enjoying Chuseok with my family,cousins. >>I think it's more important than enjoying Chuseok with my family and relatives. Mind meditation is to fight true I to false I >>Mind meditation is to fight the true from the false self.

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