Chuseok
학생이 쓴 원문
Chuseok is coming to Korean. Chuseok is one of the biggest holiday in Korea. I will go to the headquater of mind meditation academy to train my mind for a week. Because I can use 1 week holiday including Chuseok vacations. I can't use 1 week holidays at ordinary days. That's why I will go there using the holidays to train my mind. After I have trained my mind meditation, I really feel better and easy than the past even though I just belongs to 3 levels of 8. Before I go to there at Chuseok holidays, I have to ask to be excused my uncle,aunts,cousins. I think it's more important than enjoying Chuseok with my family,cousins. Mind meditation is to fight true I to false I
강사 첨삭
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>>Dona<<
Chuseok is coming to Korean.
>>Chuseok is coming to Korea.
Chuseok is one of the biggest holiday in Korea.
>> Chuseok is one of the biggest holidays in Korea.
I will go to the headquater of mind meditation academy to train my mind for a week.
>>I will go to the head quarters for meditation to train my mind for a week.
Because I can use 1 week holiday including Chuseok vacations.
>>CORRECT.
I can't use 1 week holidays at ordinary days.
>>I can't use a week holiday on ordinary days.
That's why I will go there using the holidays to train my mind.
>>CORRECT.
After I have trained my mind meditation, I really feel better and easy than the past even though I just belongs to 3 levels of 8.
>>After training my mind for meditating, I would feel better and comfortable than the past even though I only belong to the 3rd of 8 levels.
Before I go to there at Chuseok holidays, I have to ask to be excused my uncle,aunts,cousins.
>>Before going there on Chuseok holiday, I'll have to ask permission from my uncles, aunts and cousins.
I think it's more important than enjoying Chuseok with my family,cousins.
>>I think it's more important than enjoying Chuseok with my family and relatives.
Mind meditation is to fight true I to false I
>>Mind meditation is to fight the true from the false self.
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