Chuseok, Korean Thanksgiving Day

September 7 to 9 was Korean Thanksgiving day,Chuseok. On Chuseok,I met my relatives. When I met them, I said, "Long time no see!" There were my cousins too. I have three cousins. They are all boys and younger than me. One is 14,another is 6 and the other is 2. We played fun games and also drew a picture. The title was 'Chuseok'. I and my cousins drew it. But when we finished drawing it, my sister tore it by mistake. I was ok,but my cousins looked so sad. So I gave them a big candy. Luckily,they felt happy. It was time to go back home. I was little bit sad,but I said goodbye to them. But when I came home,I was happy. September 10 was national time off in lieu!

Hi [이름]!^^ Thank you for sending this!^^ Holidays are really a un time since we can do the things that we want to do. Chuseok is a family holiday and the way you described it really gave me the impression that it is fun!^^ How often do you see your cousins? Do you a Always have fun with them? Keep up the good work [이름]!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: September 7 to 9 was Korean Thanksgiving day,Chuseok. >> CORRECT OR> We celebrated Chuseok as our Thanksgiving on September 7 to 9.On Chuseok,I met my relatives. >> CORRECT OR> I was with my relatives on Chuseok.When I met them, I said, \"Long time no see!\" >> CORRECT OR> I told them \"long time no see\".There were my cousins too. >> My cousins were there too.I have three cousins. >> CORRECT OR> We are four cousins together.  They are all boys and younger than me. >> CORRECT OR> All of them are all younger boys than me.One is 14,another is 6 and the other is 2. >> CORRECT OR> They are aged 14, 6 and 2.We played fun games and also drew a picture. >> CORRECT OR> We played fun games and we also had a chance to draw a picture.The title was \'Chuseok\'. >> CORRECT OR> It was titled \"Chuseok\".I and my cousins drew it. >> My cousins and I drew it.But when we finished drawing it, my sister tore it by mistake. >> CORRECT OR> My sister had torn it by mistake when we were done with it.I was ok,but my cousins looked so sad. >> I was okay ,but my cousins looked so sad. So I gave them a big candy. >> CORRECT OR> They received a lage candy from me.  Luckily,they felt happy.>> CORRECT OR> Then they were happy.It was time to go back home. >> CORRECT OR> The time to go home came.I was little bit sad,but I said goodbye to them. >> CORRECT OR> I was hesitant to say goodbye because they were sad.But when I came home,I was happy.>> CORRECT OR> I was happy when I reached home.September 10 was national time off in lieu! >> CORRECT OR> We had an in lieu holiday on the 10th of September.