Cindy wants a cute puppy

I really wants to get a puppy. So I always asked mom for it. But she always said "No". I keep trying on it. Finally she said she'll buy a puppy.But there was three condition. First, I have to persuade my family. Second, I have to 500 points. And last, I have to get all 100s (perfect scores) on Mid-term test! That was impossible! But better than nothing! I'll keep trying on for puppy. Postscript:Points is when I do homework by myself, my mom give me 1 point or read 1 book 1 point. Now I'm 342 points and next momth there is final test!

hello cindy! wow, you got a long way to go for you to get that puppy, but you always talk about that in our class, so i guess you really want it. at least you have a chance at getting your puppy. i wish you good luck with getting it.   here is your composition:   I really wants to get a puppy. So I always asked mom for it.But she always said "No". I keep trying on it. Finally she said she'll buy a puppy.But there was three condition. First, I have to persuade my family. Second, I have to 500 points. And last, I have to get all 100s (perfect scores) on Mid-term test! That was impossible!But better than nothing! I'll keep trying on for puppy.Postscript:Points is when I do homework by myself, my mom give me 1 point or read 1 book 1 point. Now I'm 342 points and next momth there is final test!   here is the corrected version:   I really want to get a puppy. So I always ask my mom for it.But she always says "No". I keep trying on it. Finally she said she'll buy a puppy.But there were three conditions. First, I have to persuade my family. Second, I have to get 500 points. And last, I have to get all 100s (perfect scores) on the Mid-term test! That is impossible!But better than nothing! I'll keep on trying for the puppy.Postscript:Points is when I do my homework by myself, my mom gives me 1 point or when I read a book. Now I have 342 points and next momth is the final test!