cinema
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Many people don\'t go see a movie these days. And so am I. As the other platforms like youtube and nexflix things are getting develop and they offer various contents. In addition, because of the covid, we couldn\'t go to the theater to prevent us from the spread of infection. I also didn\'t go see a movie for a while. I like the cinema vibe. You know, we watch with many poeple together, the suspenseful sound, caramel popcorn (my fav
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Many people don\'t go see a movie these days. And so am I.
>>> Many people don\'t watch movies these days. I also don\'t.
As the other platforms like youtube and nexflix things are getting develop and they offer various contents.
>>> Many movie or video platforms like YouTube and Netflix are getting developed and they offer different contents.
In addition, because of the covid, we couldn\'t go to the theater to prevent us from the spread of infection.
>>> In addition, because of COVID-19, we are not allowed to go to the theaters to prevent the spread of infection.
I also didn\'t go see a movie for a while.
>>> Correct.
I like the cinema vibe.
>>> Correct.
You know, we watch with many poeple together, the suspenseful sound, caramel popcorn (my fav
>>> You know, we watch with many other people and enjoy the surround sound system while eating caramel popcorn.
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