civet coffee

2022-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I don\'t know exactly if civet coffee trees can be raised in the wild or live civet cats are rasied in the cages for coffee production. Do wild civet cats are confined to cages by humans? I hope the human should stop doing animal abuse for the sake of human\'s joy and spectacle. Don\'t do any more cruel doing! please.

강사 첨삭

Good day Ms. [이름]!

Yes, it broke my heart when I read an article about civet cats being poached and kept in cages.

Here is a link related to that. It\'s quite old but until now it is still being practiced.

https://www.worldanimalprotection.org/news/civets-enslaved-growing-demand-tourism-and-luxury-coffee

Thank you for sharing your thought today.

Aki~

I don\'t know exactly if civet coffee trees can be raised in the wild or live civet cats are rasied in the cages for coffee production.

>>> I don\'t know exactly if civet coffee trees can be raised in the wild or live civet cats are raised in cages for coffee production.
Do wild civet cats are confined to cages by humans?

>>> Correct!
I hope the human should stop doing animal abuse for the sake of human\'s joy and spectacle.
>>>Correct!
Don\'t do any more cruel doing! please.

>>> Stop animal cruelty. please.

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