Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Another job well done for your composition today. Keep up the good work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
Yes. I will show some reasons that will support my following opinion through this essay.
>>CORRECT
Nowadays, because of a sudden increase of price of properties of apartments in [이름]ul rich man in Korea is getting richer, such as people who have properties in [이름]ul.
>>Nowadays, because of a sudden increase in the price of properties of apartments in [이름]ul, the rich men in Korea are getting richer, such as people who have properties in [이름]ul.
Also, poor people are growing poor especially nowadays because of pandemics.
>>Also, poor people are growing poorer especially nowadays because of the pandemic.
Because of a butterfly effect.
>>It\'s because of a butterfly effect.
World economics is unstable these days because of Covid19.
>>CORRECT
Many start ups closed their businesses and the price of products increased.
>>CORRECT
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