Claire\'s Homework

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Martial arts are considered a form of culture, not only as self-defense in modern society.

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If I can learn a state of martial arts, I would like to learn Kendo (Japanese fencing) because this form of martial arts is more specialized in self-defense, which can be more practical in real life; martial arts keep my physical and mental health.

>>>  ...martial arts keep my physical and mental health in good condition.

Firstly, Kendo is more specialized in self-defense.

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Martial art is well known for self-defense which is very practical in real life. 

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Self-defense is especially essential for women who are physically weak compared to men. 

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To protect ourselves from harm, Kendo can help. 

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Kendo is very specialized in self-defense. 

>>>  OR: Kendo specializes in self-defense. 

Kendo is differentiated from other martial arts about the specific type of martial arts. 

>>>  OR: Kendo differs from other martial arts because it is a specialized one.

Kendo is a “self-defense martial art” that is mainly for self-defense. 

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Self-defense martial art is different from essential martial art when using power. 

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Of course, the intention of martial art is not to harm people, but martial arts purpose also includes dueling. 

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But self-defense martial art only pursues pure self-defense.

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   Secondly, martial arts keep healthy.

>>> Secondly, martial arts keep us healthy.  

Physical movements help increase the health of the immune system and increase stamina. 

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Martial arts are also accepted as an exercise aside from being martial arts. 

>>> OR: Martial arts are also accepted as a form of exercise aside from being martial arts.  

Activities in martial arts are as practical as famous exercises. 

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Some people start martial arts to enhance their health. 

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Martial arts significantly enhance lung activities, immune system, stamina, etc. 

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They take charge of one of the most essentials which form the health. 

>>>  OR: They take charge of one of the most essentials which is health.

Furthermore, Kendo helps sit in a correct posture.

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   Thirdly, martial arts keep mental health healthy.

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Mental health is essential. 

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If our mind isn’t healthy, it might be connected to severe mental illnesses. 

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Stress, worries, etc., might cause mental illnesses. 

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Activities in martial arts can relieve stress and help find peace and calm of mind. 

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Martial arts are also related to meditating. 

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Meditating, which researchers also prove, can help discipline one’s mind and give peace to mind. 

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Martial arts include meditating too.

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   Martial arts are settled in our society as a form of art. 

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Martial arts should be preserved as a historical culture and art. 

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Martial arts created and contributed to self-defense and enhancing health. 

>>>  Martial arts created and contributed to self-defense also enhance health. 

Martial arts has melted into modern cultures and become many things.

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