Claire\'s Homework

Very well said Claire. Thank you for this great explanation. Keep it up!

In most nations, there are tragic histories as wars, invasions, and colonization. 

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Korea for example went through the Japanese colonial period which caused hostility between Korea and Japan since now. 

>>>  Korea for example went through the Japanese colonial period which has caused hostility between Korea and Japan until now. 

But keeping a good relationship with other countries is necessary because country relationships affect the most important and necessary components national defense, economy, and diplomacy.

>>>  But keeping a good relationship with other countries is necessary because country relationships affect the most important and necessary components such as national defense, economy, and diplomacy. 

Firstly, benefits for national defense.

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For an example of Korea, while Japanese colonial period Korea was completely oppressed without any doubt of little defiance against Japan. 

>>> For an example of Korea, during the Japanese colonial period, Korea was completely oppressed without any doubt of little defiance against Japan.   

While Koreans could hardly think of fighting against Japanese unfair and ruthless rule, America has dropped an atomic bomb on Japan. 

>>> OR: While Koreans could hardly think of fighting against Japan\'s unfair and ruthless rule, America has dropped an atomic bomb on Japan. 

That became the opportunity for the independence of Korea. 

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After that, America and Korea became allied nations which is beneficial to each nation.

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Secondly, benefits for the economy.

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As there are many interchanges with other nations, the much profit our nation gains. 

>>>  As there are many interchanges with other nations, the more profit our nation gains.

>>> OR: As there are many trades with other nations, the more profit our nation gains.   

To have many chances of interchanges, the relationship with other nations should be good. 

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The happening of Korea in the past would prove it. 

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>>> OR: The incident in Korea in the past would prove it.  

Because of the influence of the past, there were many boycotts of Japanese goods. 

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The blow was severe for a few Japanese franchise stores. 

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Some stores were even exposed to the danger of closing. 

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Ultimately, the bad relationship with Japan caused this to happen. 

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The relationship with many nations is necessary for many trades with diverse countries.

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Lastly, benefits for the diplomacy.

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Diplomatic politics is also one of the most important formations that construct the structure of good diplomacy. 

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In most situations, bad relationship with other nations causes diplomatic conflicts. 

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And sometimes, simple conflicts end up in wars. 

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Therefore, stable countries should not be involved in international conflicts. 

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Having a stable and good relationship with other nations can give a beneficial influence on diplomacy. 

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Diplomacy is a wrap-up for both national defenses and the economy. 

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Accordingly, having stable diplomacy means the country has a stable economy and well-trained troops for national defense.

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Having a good relationship with other nations is crucial because it decides the ultimate faith of the country. 

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National defense, economy, and diplomacy all take a part in forming a country. 

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A good relationship with other nations keeps the world peaceful and furthermore, a good relationship is a beneficial component for a frame of the country.

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