Claire\'s Homework
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Friends are the companions who would help standing up when we face difficulties in life.
>>> OR: Friends are the companions who would help in standing up when we face difficulties in life.
Good friends pat on our back when we are frustrated.
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>>> OR: Good friends give us a pat on our back when we are frustrated.
They would be glad if we get a successful result on something.
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People say friends are gifts from god.
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It\'s essential to have a good friend, but we have to be good friends first.
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\"Friends in need are friends indeed.\"
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This passage contains many meanings.
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\"Friends in need are friends indeed\" means true friends are friends that are near us when we need help.
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It means that different from faithful friends, fake friends would leave us when we genuinely ask for help after they derive benefits.
>>> It means different from that of faithful friends, fake friends would leave us when we genuinely ask for help after they derive benefits.
On the flip side, true friends would not leave us in good or difficult situations.
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For example, some nefarious people would approach someone in great demand, and after they take their goals, they would leave one behind under challenging conditions.
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Friends indeed are friends who would never leave without considering our situation.
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But, before we hope for a true friend, we have to be good friends first.
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To become good friends, we have to be loyal, kind, and maintain an attitude of respect.
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We must not betray our friends.
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Crossing friends includes lying, alienation, etc., which negatively affects relationships with friends.
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Good friendship starts from a belief in each other.
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>>> OR: Good friendship starts from believing in each other.
If betray continues, it would destroy a good relationship with a friend.
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The crossing is a morally wrong thing.
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Kindness is also an initiative component in forming a good relationship with friends.
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A minor consideration and thoughtfulness are very touching for others.
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For example, when a friend forgets something, we can lend ours.
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When those small kindness piles up, fellowship with friends would be better.
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Next, respect toward friends is also in need.
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As a person, respecting others is a must.
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Especially if we make friends, we have to respect he or her country culture, personality, etc.
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A delicate treat changes the relationships.
>>> A delicate treatment changes the relationships.
Without friends, there is no friendship.
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The value of friends is priceless.
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As friends are the precious presence in our lives, we have to be respectful, loyal, and kind to them.
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The sentence \"Friends in need are friends indeed\" teaches us how valuable a true friend is.
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