Claire\'s Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What age do you want to live to? Why?
I want to live up to 100 years old.
If you ask me why you won\'t live longer, it\'s because I must see my family and friends passing away.
Living the rest of my life without loved ones is meaningless for me. However, 100 years isn\'t a short time!
I believe 100 years is enough time to try everything and create good memories.
강사 첨삭
Hi Claire!
That was beautiful! Let\'s live for a long long time! haha. Great job on your composition! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
If you ask me why you won\'t live longer, it\'s because I must see my family and friends passing away.
If you ask me why you won\'t live longer, it\'s because I must see my family and friends passing away.
>>If you ask me why I won\'t want to live longer, it\'s because I must see my family and friends passing away.
Living the rest of my life without loved ones is meaningless for me.
Living the rest of my life without loved ones is meaningless for me.
>>CORRECT!
However, 100 years isn\'t a short time!
>>CORRECT!
I believe 100 years is enough time to try everything and create good memories.
I believe 100 years is enough time to try everything and create good memories.
>>CORRECT!
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