Clara
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I usually spend my day looking at my cell phone. I think I should correct this. I will try to see less cell phones.
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- Teacher Elise
I usually spend my day looking at my cell phone.
>> I usually spend my day using my cellphone.
I think I should correct this.
>>CORRECT
I will try to see less cell phones.
>> I will try to avoid using my cellphone as much as I used to before.
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