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Thanks for helping me a lot. How can I appreciate your help? Could u please proofread these sentences in our class? As the development of Internet community such as SNS and supply of mobile devices like smartphones, the digital media market including the Ebook has been increased. Powerful security measures for vulnerability of security which could occur during payment are in poor condition. Thus, countermeasures against these should be prepared immediately. Therefore, we intend to make up for vulnerabilities which may occur when using payment service via existing methods. This study intends to complement vulnerabilities such as SSA, tag forgery by applying security technologies such as vibration cue user authentication technology, authentication scheme and so on. Also, this study designed and implemented NFC ordering and payment system. To prove efficiency and validity, degree of payment,convenience, and security have been compared and analyzed against existing studies.

Hello Ms. [Name], Happy Thursday! I believe there are very few corrections needed for these sentences. I have already made the corrections below so we will just review them later in class. I\'ll see you in class later! ~~ Teacher Giselle :) ~~   Thanks for helping me a lot. >>Correct. How can I appreciate your help?>>Correct.Could u please proofread these sentences in our class?>>Correct.As the development of Internet community such as SNS and supply of mobile devices like smartphones, the digital media market including the Ebook has been increased. >>As the development of the Internet community such as SNS and the supply of mobile devices like smartphones continues to rise, the digital media market  including the Ebook has also increased.Powerful security measures for vulnerability of security which could occur during payment are in poor condition. >>Correct.Thus, countermeasures against these should be prepared immediately. >>Correct. Therefore, we intend to make up for vulnerabilities which may occur when using payment service via existing methods. >>Therefore, we intend to make up for the vulnerabilities which may occue when using payment service via existing methods. This study intends to complement vulnerabilities such as SSA, tag forgery by applying security technologies such as vibration cue user authentication technology, authentication scheme and so on. >>Correct. Also, this study designed and implemented NFC ordering and payment system. >>Correct. To prove efficiency and validity, degree of payment,convenience, and security have been compared and analyzed against existing studies. >>Correct.