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학생이 쓴 원문
I think dividing classes based on skills and gades benefits both superior and inferior students. In our academy, we consider students\' efforts or attitudes when dividing classes. We think that those who make much effort and are hardworking can improve their skills and further catch up with superior peers.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
I think dividing classes can really help address students\' needs. Grouping students who are at the same level can make it easier for them to study. But like you said, effort counts. Also, using words like ‘stronger/weaker’ instead of ‘superior/inferior’ can make your writing sound more professional and less judgmental, so you can take note of that as well. Thank you for doing your homework!
- T. Caitlyn
I think dividing classes based on skills and gades benefits both superior and inferior students.
>> I think dividing classes based on skills and grades benefits both stronger and weaker students.
In our academy, we consider students\' efforts or attitudes when dividing classes.
>> CORRECT
We think that those who make much effort and are hardworking can improve their skills and further catch up with superior peers.
>> We think that those who put in a lot of effort and are hardworking can improve their skills and catch up with stronger peers.
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