classes which I had enjoyed.

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for taking the time to write these well-written and well thought-of compositions to answer the homework questions I\'ve given you. I really enjoyed reading what your thoughts are about the topic. I know that right now, you want to focus on speaking more but it\'s also important to practice expressing your thoughts through writing. These writing exercises will help you learn how to organize your thoughts better. Keep up the amazing work! See you in class! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

1. I have enjoyed natural sciences like physics, chemistry, biology or physics and math.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I\'ve always found natural sciences like Physics, Chemistry, Biology interesting.

2. I just like them because for my perspective, the answer make sense.

>>I just like them because in my perspective, the answers make sense.

3. I feel it is something you can kind of prove . (Not really if you are digging it like a scientist) .

>>I feel that it is something you can prove but not really when you\'re digging on it like a scientist.

4. As I don\'t want to look like a nerd , I will change the answer to ... flower arrangement!

>>As I don\'t want to look like a nerd , I will change the answer to flower arrangement!
5. I took flower arrangement in my junior year for fun and it was stunning!

>>I took flower arrangement classes in my junior year and it was very interesting.

6. Before, when I see people who is making flower, I never had thought there will be certain rule to locate different kind of flowers in one place.

>>In the past, when I see people arranging flowers, I never thought that there were certain rules on how to arrange different kinds of flowers as a unit.

7. However, it was complicated art combining geometry and physics.

>>I also think that it is a complicated art which uses concepts from geometry and physics.

8. For example, flowers or greens(forgot the name ,,, those are green which look like big grass.) which look heavy have to go on the bottom.

>>For example, flowers or bulky leaves have to go at the bottom.

9. Plus, when you are putting big flowers and small flowers together, it is better to put stick the big one first evenly and then, fill the gaps between big flowers with small flowers which end up look more balanced.

>>Also, when you are putting big and small flowers together, it is better to put the big ones evenly first and then, fill in the gaps between the big flowers using small flowers to make it look more balanced.