Cleaning
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Anna!
I never thought that you clean your home every weekend.
Well, we do the same.
To me, I don\'t like looking at the kitchen with mess. (Hahaha)
So, I always clean it on weekends.
Anyway, your idea is good.
You should try it.
Of course, living in a clean house is very comfortable.
~Teacher Chloe
I am interested in Simple life so I had cleaned my house during weekend.
>>I am interested in a simple life so, I clean my house on weekends.
Cleaning\'s base is throwing.
>>Cleaning to me is throwing out trash.
I throwed about five boxes of garbage.
>>I threw about five boxes of trash.
First of all, clothes and books were best problem when I clean.
>>First of all, clothes and books are the main problem when I clean.
I like to buy them so full in my house.
>>I like buying clothes and books.
My husband also love to buy them.
>>My husband also does.
Drastically, I throw them in this time.
>>Suddenly, I just threw them away.
And I sold it to internet and I shared with neiborhood.
>>Although, some of them are sold online and shared in the neighborhood.
It was wonderful experince.
>>It was a wonderful experience.
Actually, I will thorw and share it continually.
>>Actually, I will do the same again next time.
I also won\'t buy any them more.
>>I am thinking to stop buying them.
I will put on clothes in the my closet and I will borrow some books from library.
>>I will just put on the clothes that are in my closet and borrow books from the library.
Is it possible?
>>Correct!
Yes I will do my best.
>>Yes, I will do my best.
I feel good when I am in the clear house.
>>I feel good when I am in a clean house.
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