Cleaning

2017-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I am interested in Simple life so I had cleaned my house during weekend. Cleaning's base is throwing. I throwed about five boxes of garbage. First of all, clothes and books were best problem when I clean. I like to buy them so full in my house. My husband also love to buy them. Drastically, I throw them in this time. And I sold it to internet and I shared with neiborhood. It was wonderful experince. Actually, I will thorw and share it continually. I also won't buy any them more. I will put on clothes in the my closet and I will borrow some books from library. Is it possible? Yes I will do my best. I feel good when I am in the clear house.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Anna!

I never thought that you clean your home every weekend.

Well, we do the same.

To me, I don\'t like looking at the kitchen with mess. (Hahaha)

So, I always clean it on weekends.

Anyway, your idea is good.

You should try it.

Of course, living in a clean house is very comfortable.

~Teacher Chloe

I am interested in Simple life so I had cleaned my house during weekend.

>>I am interested in a simple life so, I clean my house on weekends.

Cleaning\'s base is throwing.

>>Cleaning to me is throwing out trash.

I throwed about five boxes of garbage.

>>I threw about five boxes of trash.

First of all, clothes and books were best problem when I clean.

>>First of all, clothes and books are the main problem when I clean.

I like to buy them so full in my house.

>>I like buying clothes and books.

My husband also love to buy them.

>>My husband also does.

Drastically, I throw them in this time.

>>Suddenly, I just threw them away.

And I sold it to internet and I shared with neiborhood.

>>Although, some of them are sold online and shared in the neighborhood.

It was wonderful experince.

>>It was a wonderful experience.

Actually, I will thorw and share it continually.

>>Actually, I will do the same again next time.

I also won\'t buy any them more.

>>I am thinking to stop buying them.

I will put on clothes in the my closet and I will borrow some books from library.

>>I will just put on the clothes that are in my closet and borrow books from the library.

Is it possible?

>>Correct!

Yes I will do my best.

>>Yes, I will do my best.

I feel good when I am in the clear house.  

>>I feel good when I am in a clean house.

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