Cleaning dishes
학생이 쓴 원문
My girlfriend is a good cook. Whenever I meet her, she make a delicious meal especially along with my favorite menu for me. So I always clean the dishes whenever eating time is overed. It’s something like give and take. Cleaning dishes is a responsable to me. It is not a hard work for me because I must eat some food that gives me a energy.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
Please be careful of the use of adjectives and your spelling.
Familiarize yourself with the meanings of new words and expressions.
I included some in the suggestions below.
Make sure to apply them next time.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My girlfriend is a good cook.
>> Correct
Whenever I meet her, she make a delicious meal especially along with my favorite menu for me.
>> Whenever I\'m with her, she make a delicious meal for me especially my favorites.
So I always clean the dishes whenever eating time is overed.
>> That\'s why I always wash the dishes when the meal is over.
It’s something like give and take.
>> Correct
Cleaning dishes is a responsable to me.
>> Washing the dishes is my responsibility.
It is not a hard work for me because I must eat some food that gives me a energy.
>> It is not hard work for me because I always eat some food that gives me energy.
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