Cleaning my room

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Here are my corrections for you:

When I go into house, I hate cleaning my room. Because, when I go home, I am usually so tired doing work. 

>> When I get home, I hate cleaning my room. 

Because, when I go home, I am usually so tired doing work. 

>> This is because when I arrive home, I usually feel so tired from work. 

So, I don\'t have any power of cleaning, and I really want to take a rest at the time. 

>> So, I don\'t have any power left to clean, and I really want to take a rest at the time. 

I think I am tired of cleaning my room. But, I know, it is necessary to live in my room.

>>  I think I am tired of cleaning my room but I know it is necessary.