climate changes
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There are four seasons in Korea.(spring, summer, autumn, and winter) but i think spring and autumn seem to be disappearing.
I think it is changing into a short change of seasons - summer - short change of seasons - winter.
I also think the way it rains in summer is changing.
Usually, Korea was hot all a long and there is heavy rain for a week or two weeks just once, especially this summer it rained unpredictably like scol in Southeast Asia.
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There are four seasons in Korea.(spring, summer, autumn, and winter) but i think spring and autumn seem to be disappearing.
>> There are four seasons in Korea: spring, summer, autumn, and winter but I think spring and autumn seem to be disappearing.
I think it is changing into a short change of seasons - summer - short change of seasons - winter.
>> I think it is changing into a shorter summer and shorter winter.
I also think the way it rains in summer is changing.
>> CORRECT =)
Usually, Korea was hot all a long and there is heavy rain for a week or two weeks just once, especially this summer it rained unpredictably like scol in Southeast Asia.
>> Usually, Korea was hot all along and there was heavy rain for a week or two weeks just once, especially this summer it rained unpredictably like in Southeast Asia.
There are four seasons in Korea.(spring, summer, autumn, and winter) but i think spring and autumn seem to be disappearing.
>> There are four seasons in Korea: spring, summer, autumn, and winter but I think spring and autumn seem to be disappearing.
I think it is changing into a short change of seasons - summer - short change of seasons - winter.
>> I think it is changing into a shorter summer and shorter winter.
I also think the way it rains in summer is changing.
>> CORRECT =)
Usually, Korea was hot all a long and there is heavy rain for a week or two weeks just once, especially this summer it rained unpredictably like scol in Southeast Asia.
>> Usually, Korea was hot all along and there was heavy rain for a week or two weeks just once, especially this summer it rained unpredictably like in Southeast Asia.
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