Climate of the savanna and how it affects life there.
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conditions are warm to hot in almost all seasons. it\'s about 25 degrees to 35 degrees, it dries the field and heats. And the rainfall occurs for only a few months each year, about October to March. it grows the tree and shrubs, or other vegetations.
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Hello there, Sam!
This is your revised composition and many thanks for sending it. You can find the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Climate of the savanna and how it affects life there.
conditions are warm to hot in almost all seasons.
>>> The conditions are warm to hot in almost all seasons.
it\'s about 25 degrees to 35 degrees, it dries the field and heats.
>>> Temperatures range from about 25 to 35 degrees Celsius, which dries the fields and makes the land hot.
And the rainfall occurs for only a few months each year, about October to March.
>>> Rainfall occurs only for a few months each year, usually between October and March.
it grows the tree and shrubs, or other vegetations.
>>> This rainfall allows trees, shrubs, and other vegetation to grow.
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