Climbing in the mountain.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Gabby!
I see and hear a lot of thing on the mountain.
I feel fresh air, smell soil and I see powerful many people.
They do on the mountain to biker, walker to bare foots, and runner, etc. They seem to like nature too.
The cities have cement of road and building all. The mountain get relaxed my [이름]d.
That isn\'t good people\'s health and many people go to the mountain for their health.
By the way, we talked a Korean drama last Friday. The subject is marverlous inheritance.
I was understanding. It\'s a drama where they father finds a good way to bequeathable to legacy to greedy children.
Of coruse, they will reflect on their\'s mistake at the end.
I watch TV drama at weekdays only one.
Good bye!
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Great job! Thanks for always working on your homeworks. :)
- T. Gabby :)
Hi, Gabby!
>> Correct.
I see and hear a lot of thing on the mountain.
I see and hear a lot of thing on the mountain.
>> I see and hear a lot of things on the mountain.
I feel fresh air, smell soil and I see powerful many people.
I feel fresh air, smell soil and I see powerful many people.
>> I feel fresh air, smell soil and I see many powerful people.
They do on the mountain to biker, walker to bare foots, and runner, etc.
They do on the mountain to biker, walker to bare foots, and runner, etc.
>> They bike, run and walk on bare feet.
They seem to like nature too.
>> They seem to like nature too.
The cities have cement of road and building all.
The cities have cement of road and building all.
>> The cities have buildings,
The mountain get relaxed my [이름]d.
>> The mountain relaxed my [이름]d.
That isn\'t good people\'s health and many people go to the mountain for their health.
That isn\'t good people\'s health and many people go to the mountain for their health.
>> Cities are not so good for people that\'s why they go to the mountain for their health.
By the way, we talked a Korean drama last Friday.
By the way, we talked a Korean drama last Friday.
>> By the way, we talked about a Korean drama last Friday.
The subject is marverlous inheritance.
>> Correct.
I was understanding.
I was understanding.
>> I understand it.
It\'s a drama where they father finds a good way to bequeathable to legacy to greedy children.
>> It\'s a drama where their father finds a good way to have legacy for their greedy children.
Of coruse, they will reflect on their\'s mistake at the end.
Of coruse, they will reflect on their\'s mistake at the end.
>> Of course, they will reflect on their mistakes at the end.
I watch TV drama at weekdays only one.
I watch TV drama at weekdays only one.
>> I only watch TV drama once a week.
Good bye!
Good bye!
>> Correct.
See you tomorrow.
See you tomorrow.
>> Correct.
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