Clocks
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Theme: [ESSAY] How important are clocks to you?
It\'s not so important.
Nowadays, we can tell times using smart phones.
But clock is a stuff that tells time.
So It\'s not so important but It is a little bit important.
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Theme: [ESSAY] How important are clocks to you?
It\'s not so important.
>> or: It\'s not really that important.
Nowadays, we can tell times using smart phones.
>> Nowadays, we can tell time using smartphones.
But clock is a stuff that tells time.
>> But a clock is some stuff that tells time.
So It\'s not so important but It is a little bit important.
>> or: So even though it\'s not that important, it is still quite useful.
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