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Sometimes make problem when parents and children are too close, by themselves.
It can be prevent children to grow up independently.
When the close between mon and child is excessive, it become obsession..
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Good day Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for bringing this out. I totally agree with you that some parents are very obsessed with their children. For some parents they think this is their way of showing love to their children.
Have a great day :)
Aki~
Sometimes make problem when parents and children are too close, by themselves.
>>> It sometimes create a problem when parents and children are too close with each other.
It can be prevent children to grow up independently.
>>> CORRECT
When the close between mon and child is excessive, it become obsession..
>>> When the closeness between the mom and the child is excessive, it becomes an obsession.
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