Clothes.

2013-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Yes, I agree with this statement. I think self-confidence is based on appearances. One day, I watched a tv program that appeared special women who always wore styles of a tiger skin. She said these kinds of clothes give me energy. Also, according to some studies, some groups wore prisoner's clothes and others wore police officer's clothes. So scientists observed them. Surprisingly, clothes reflect their behave. So in my opinion, if i am depressed, i have to wear bright snd pretty clothes to be happy.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday [이름]! I do agree that clothes affect a person\'s behavior. They say that clothes also reflect someone\'s personality. To keep you stay happy everyday, you ought to wear bright and pretty clothes indeed. See you later! -- T. Giselle ^^   Yes, I agree with this statement.>> Correct.  I think self-confidence is based on appearances.>> Correct. >> I think self-confidence is based on someone\'s appearance.One day, I watched a tv program that appeared special women who always wore styles of a tiger skin.>> One day, I watched a TV program that featured special women who always wore tiger skin clothes.She said these kinds of clothes give me energy.>> One of the women said that these kinds of clothes give her energy.Also, according to some studies, some groups wore prisoner\'s clothes and others wore police officer\'s clothes.>> Correct.So scientists observed them.>> Correct.Surprisingly, clothes reflect their behave.>> Suprisingly, their behaviors were reflected by their clothes.So in my opinion, if i am depressed, i have to wear bright snd pretty clothes to be happy. >> Correct. (Spelling check: and)

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