Clouds Homework

2018-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I delete 1 sentence, it's "Answer the following questions." OK? 1. What do the clouds look like? Sometimes, animals. car, other. What are other answers to this question? 2. Do clouds change their shapes quickly? Yes!

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I delete 1 sentence, it\'s \"Answer the following questions.\" OK?

>> I deleted one sentence, it is \"Answer the following questions\", okay?

1. What do the clouds look like?

Sometimes, animals. car, other.

>> Sometimes the clouds look like animals, cars and many more. 

What are other answers to this question?

2. Do clouds change their shapes quickly?

Yes!

>> correct

>> OR: Yes, shapes changes their shapes quickly.

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