Club at school
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I was laughing here because we have the same interest. kkk
And that is eating. Of course, it\'s obvious with my body. kkk
Anyway, just enjoy your class in cooking.
You\'re going to learn a lot about cooking food and different ways to make food.
Tell me a story about your cooking experience. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
My school club is cooking.
>> Correct
>> or: I joined the cooking club.
In that class I have to pay 10dollar and making food like cake,cookies,bread and eating at home.
>> In that class I have to pay 10 dollars to make foods like cakes, cookies, bread, and to eat at home.
Cooking is not very fun but I like eating. I like making Korean food.
>> Cooking is not very fun to me, but I like eating and I like making Korean food.
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