Club in university 2

2012-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

I also entered SELS club in university. This club do 'English education volunteer work'. We introduce Canada, U.S.A., U.K. etc 's culture to elementary school students with an interesting game once a month. When we introduce cultures, We have to speak only English. I love children and I like to speak English. So I become a member at this club. But I am worried because of speaking only Eglish. I heard that there are some children who speaks well better than me. So I have to study English more. Anyway I practice patterns to use sentences in the class. Thank you for reading and correcting my writing. I always think that I appreciate you for listening my broken English.

강사 첨삭

A pleasant happy Friday evening to you my dear! You know what, I have always appreaciated your work, strength and determination. You\'re doing good and nothing will be impossible if you will really work for your goals to make it possible. Keep on talking and writing using the English language because that is also one way of steping closer in achieving your target goals. I will always be here for you, and I will always be happy to read your compositions because I know I can help you with that. Throughout your lifetime you might face a lot of challenges. It is just another way that God test your patience and courage. At the end he would surely show you the road which leads to success. T.Faye Club in university 2 >> Club in University 2. I also entered SELS club in university. >> Correct! This club do \'English education volunteer work\'. >> Correct! OR >> This club has something to do with the \"English education volunteer work\". We introduce Canada, U.S.A., U.K. etc \'s culture to elementary school students with an interesting game once a month. >> We introduced Canada, U.S.A., U.K., and other country\'s culture to the elementary students through interesting games, and that happens only once a month. When we introduce cultures, We have to speak only English. >> When we introduce cultures, we have to speak in the English language only. I love children and I like to speak English. >> Correct! OR >> I love children and I also like to speak in English. So I become a member at this club. >> And that is the reason why I became a member of this club. But I am worried because of speaking only Eglish. >> Correct! OR >> But I\'m worried because of speaking only English. I heard that there are some children who speaks well better than me. >> I heard that there are some children who speak better than me. So I have to study English more. >> Correct! Anyway I practice patterns to use sentences in the class. >> Anyway, I do practice patterns and use it in sentences in the class.Thank you for reading and correcting my writing. >> Correct! I always think that I appreciate you for listening my broken English. >> I always appreciate you for listening to my broken English.

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